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Dull

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She turns on the shower
Dull buzzing
Her clothes come off piece by piece
She closes her eyes as she walks past
The mirror; hating herself.

Her body is ugly
Just like her soul
The lights come off
Dull darkness

Showering quickly
Tears mixing with water falling in
Slow motion
The water stops
Dull dripping

She dresses in silence
Already dreading the moment
When she has to shower
Again
About a girl and her self hatred
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mannel's avatar
i like the ideas, but not the way you started, the first three verses look like prose, a little simplefor my taste. Overall, nice work in here.